I Am Holding Your Eyes Hostage Comments

You said it.

Nice beginning I would like to see more of this in detail Tell me more about the eyes; Why is the others persons mind wandering where does it go.

I am lost for words...good job!

I like how simply you tell it. Hail to the power of persuasion!

I really like your style Wanda. Very nice. sincerely, mary

so succinct yet mischievously clever! i love it! Jake

short, simple and very much to the point... nice one -Eila

lol nice i like it! Lylyanna

VERY GOOD, ..............