I Am Here Comments
Blow your breath into the tight veins of my heart
Paint me with your eyes,
Draw me with your hands,
Kiss me with your warm skin,
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That is very beautiful. I don't see a lot of writing like this. The kind you understand but not all of it, more so feel it.
so nice one and it was fantastic.. it carries so many emotions.. i read this and enjoyed
Sail my boat in the glossy sea of love I am here. Life is a boon with love.Nothing to complaint about. I read and comment again and again. Nice poem dear poet.Thanks again for sharing
I'm glad that you were touched by waves of the glossy sea of love. Gratitude for reading and giving feedback! Namaste & Blessings!
Wrap me with your rings of fire. Thanks for sharing this poem.
Tight veins of my heart! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Beautiful poem of love and romance. Congratulations for the poem of the day.
It is a beautuful poem in love and romance with nice collocation. Thanks for sharing and congratualitios for being selected as the poem of the day.
hey there! what comes through for me in this poem and that i like is a view of intimacy that is more than skin touching skin. glen kappy
Thank you for reading and offering feedback! Indeed Glen, since its a poem about awareness or the Self, can anything be more close, more translucent than this? Blessings!
A poem full of love and romance. Rich with vocabulary it flows like a soft wind. Loved it. Congrats.
Can a being in romance ever ignore such a passionate plea? Never! Congrats for being the member's PoD. Thank you for sharing.
Sail my boat in the glossy sea of Love, excellent love poem Thanks for sharing...
a passionate poem of self discovery and awareness? ..................wonderfully written AP
Yes Tom, it's about perceiving the Self through manifestation. Source looking at Source. Thank you for reading and appreciating!
Wow a great write, Ayni, Enriched with the words of a passionate heart, resonating with the vibrations of anyone with a heart. It's a poem for every true lover. Thanks for sharing, for being awarded POD and a huge 10++ for it. Regards. Subhas India
Yes, it is enjoyable to be seen by those for whom you care, nice. congratulations for being chosen as poem of the day.
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