Friday, December 9, 2016

I Am Here Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am here with you
With your love
And affections
And sweet conversations
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 May 2021

Scintillating poem, the love betwixt husband and wife, a true fascinating read.5 Stars full. This poem mesmerizes me, love to read and re-read this sweetest poem

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Christopher Buckley 25 October 2020

God glorifies our days and we feel this truth. Without his mercy we cannot live. We go to Church and pray on every Sunday.

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 November 2019

I Am Here. beautiful sentiments on togetherness in poet's own way.

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Pushpendra Patel 27 February 2019

With God's love we exist here. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Hans Vr 10 December 2016

I like the ending of this poem in a major way. One plus one is one. Moving from in love to love is one of the major tasks we have if we want a good and successful marriage/ long lasting relationship. I think the quality of our life depends so much on how good we are in that task. As stated in the first stanzas, doing loving things for each other, being there for each other and yes, even glorifying each others' noble ideas and deeds, are the major components of love. The magical thing if we manage to love like this, is that the in love for that person will return quite often. This is a great and very thought provoking poem, Kumarmani. Excellent.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 December 2016

I am here with you. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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