Monday, September 17, 2012

I Am Here Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am not there; I am here.
Its twilight in rain
Care to dropp a look, dear?
On to the freshly ripened grain;
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Poornima Raman
COMMENTS
Chandra Thiagarajan 21 September 2012

It's a treat to read your poem.You have talent.Hone it up and you can go places.All the best. Thanks.

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Romeo Della Valle 20 September 2012

There is magic in your writing! This nicely penned and poignant write clearly shows your sensibility, beauty and talent! It really moved me my dear! 10+++ You definitely got what it takes to make to the top of the Poetry World one day: TALENT! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! WELCOME to the Poetry World! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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Binish Cd 20 September 2012

very nice expression of emotions...........a well written poem...........

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Valsa George 19 September 2012

Alluring and enigmatic! Altogether a new approach with some novelty in diction! ! The last lines are particularly catching! Keep writing, Best of luck! !

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Unwritten Soul 19 September 2012

Sound original, and it really nice...the originality of the way you writing make the poem feel a bit different, nice to read, keep writing more, let the crescent be a full moon! _Unwritten Soul

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 19 September 2012

very good poem)))) .... great contest and the structure.... very open-hearted story....deep and undependable....

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Ramesh Rai 17 September 2012

nice, sweet and beautiful poem. keep it up.

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