I am not there; I am here.
Its twilight in rain
Care to dropp a look, dear?
On to the freshly ripened grain;
...
Read full text
There is magic in your writing! This nicely penned and poignant write clearly shows your sensibility, beauty and talent! It really moved me my dear! 10+++ You definitely got what it takes to make to the top of the Poetry World one day: TALENT! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! WELCOME to the Poetry World! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City
very nice expression of emotions...........a well written poem...........
Alluring and enigmatic! Altogether a new approach with some novelty in diction! ! The last lines are particularly catching! Keep writing, Best of luck! !
Sound original, and it really nice...the originality of the way you writing make the poem feel a bit different, nice to read, keep writing more, let the crescent be a full moon! _Unwritten Soul
very good poem)))) .... great contest and the structure.... very open-hearted story....deep and undependable....
It's a treat to read your poem.You have talent.Hone it up and you can go places.All the best. Thanks.