I Am Here Comments

the last para is very good.nice.posted 10 surya

really deep. some of what greeny said is true... about it being very advanced. brilliant! ! xxxx1000! !

This is philosophy in a poetic format. This is one thing I know pretty well because I do it myself. I loved the ending. I wasn't sure the rest of the piece was as focused as a philosophy needs to be. This tells me the structure of this piece may have not fit the philosophy. But this is very advanced stuff and I'm not going to complain about that. Clarity and communication are the keys and they were just fine. GW62

All my life I've wanted a man to choose me. I have just recently realized I could stop waiting and choose myself! Enjoyed your poem! Connie