I am held together by pieces of string
That fray with each step taken
My once great strength has long since faded
My muscles are burning, my bones are aching
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The first four lines are excellant. The repetition is
also a device I favor. I find this to be a fair poem and
delightful to read. I shall merit it a solid 8.
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The first four lines are excellant. The repetition is also a device I favor. I find this to be a fair poem and delightful to read. I shall merit it a solid 8.