Wednesday, July 14, 2010

I Am Grey! (Colour) Comments

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I am grey!
I am all around the way,
Lying on the roads and alley,
And on me, the crowd passes away.
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Jazib Kamalvi 13 September 2017

Write comment. Great start, Rabia. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Gul naz 23 July 2010

I loved your idea and the symbolism in this poem

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Very good poem..and amazing idea...Brilliant my little friend..clap clap clap

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Hans Vr 16 July 2010

What an original idea for a poem. Try to imagine to be a colour and from there write this very melodious verses. Fantastic. Some days we feel a bit like 'grey' ourselves (a bit trampled upon, our sky dark and cloudy) but realising our intrinsic worth at all time is a great antidote to the gloomy days. Keep it up.

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Rabia Fazal 15 July 2010

Thank you friends for sharing your ideas

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Afzal Shauq 15 July 2010

wow this poem has got a so sweet and meaningful idea..loved it...well done

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Ashok Azad 15 July 2010

Great observation...i for one, never thought about grey or any other color that way...Very nice...

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I say that the colour grey, is the new silver...speaks of wisdom and redemption! An interesting read! ; D

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