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Finger draws on the sand the heart of writings; it's not words, it's silent love

Excellent rhythm and good song for walking along the sand, exuberant tunes, I have enjoyed very much these rhyming lines, well excecuted!

ME POET YEPS ALWAYS A POET ADMIRES ALL THOSE INSPIRE M.A.N

The journey is fascinating and the slip of sand from the hand is amusing in all ways. Profound poem.5*******

LIFE ARISES FROM SANDY SHORES then it merges as it was there ever before no less no more