Tuesday, April 14, 2009

I Am Far From Me Comments

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Some time.............
I feel very far from myself,
When some people
do somethings with me.
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Shahin Mallik
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Naidz Ladia 19 April 2009

this is nice sweetheart..just focus...just concentrate...always mindset...ourselves are just inside us..lav this piece of yours dear... naizz

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Linda Moore 19 April 2009

Finding self, often a confusing matter. I have found that you must take care of self first, if not it is hard to help others. Finding self gives a stability, an inner strength, it is not a selfish thing to help yourself first. You must be strong in order to support others in need, it can be very draining and you must be able to replenish your strength.....expressive writing

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ata khan 14 April 2009

Sorry for the question mark after first line, this is a very good poem.

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ata khan 14 April 2009

This is a very good poem? But tell me Shahin, Why do you Punish yourself, for something people do? Is it too much of expectations yar?

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Manikgonj (Bangladesh)
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