I Am Fading Away Comments

Hey, that was a great poem.

i like it great poem...

This reminds me of some of my earlier stuff... (Not that you can get much earlier at 16..) These days it's more morbid and depressing... I like the imagery in this one. Most of your poems have amazing imagery. I can actually see what you describe. Beautifully written.

I really like this poem, Great writing!

i really liked this poem, spiclly in the frist part when u said. as i stand feeling the rain flowing over me, washing away my pain.. i really liked it

Invisibility only removes you from seen pain...Take Care of the unseen

i like this poem... good work.

Joshua, Awesome poem. I felt those days and you have captured them perfectly. Those are the days we wished we could die but motivate us to stay alive and make a legacy. Awesome! Lisa

As I read your poems I can picture mine for I write poems like yours, yours reminds me so much of mine, I love this poem, it's beautiful. Alisha

nice poem.. Asma...