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I Am Dying Of My Own Obscurity Comments

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I AM DYING OF MY OWN OBSCURITY

I am dying of my own Obscurity
I am dying of my own Mediocrity
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Shalom Freedman
dying Obscurity
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Leslie Philibert 22 March 2013

Not too sure about the way you capitalise, don`t understand the system ( proper nouns?) , and the I am bores quickly

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Douglas Scotney 22 March 2013

2276 poems and this is the first one of yours I've read. It's a good start.

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