I Am Drowning Comments

've had my pride and now my fall Will come to me this day Another wave comes crashing in And knocks me to the ground And pulls me back into the sea And there is water all around I fight the sea to keep my head Up above the wave beautiful lines of the poem. I agree with Valerie Dohren

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Great poem, very well written and rhymed. Love the metaphor.

I have stories I want to tell. good poem. thanks.