Wednesday, March 29, 2006

I Am Drawn Comments

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I scan the crowd, picking through the sea of faces
And despite the odds I find her.
Connected by a cord of love
The pull of which is inescapable
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Bob Oldfield
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Not a member No 4 07 June 2007

You capture the nature and intensity of that draw very clearly here. Brief but speaks volumes eloquently. Best, jim

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Charles Chaim Wax 29 March 2006

some are blessed just living in the bliss a moment all that's needed for a special breath to breathe joy a fine poem

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Dan Tharp 29 March 2006

quite nice, Bob..... dan

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Bob Oldfield

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