Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, April 15, 2009

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O lord and creator, thanks for beautiful world
Made it worth living with seasons hot and cold
Endless sky with wonder and thunder
Small hut like place to spend life it’s under
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Eyan Desir 24 October 2009

Good message pass on

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Darshna Chopra 18 October 2009

O lord and creator thank for beautiful world, Made it worth with seasons hot and cold

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Sachin Goswami 17 October 2009

Beautiful creators and people around noble, Offer the worship with body fit and able, Never to suffer and witness your presence,

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Catrina Heart 15 October 2009

such a wonderful message you've got here! ! ! well done.........10

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Louie -Love & Peace- Levy 26 September 2009

I am neither an atheist nor agnostic. Prayers are personal and not my means for self consolation. Controversial religions and politics are causing wars. Most difficult to comment. I admire your faith. Accept that of others and be 'Graced' Indian Quote; God is not she God is not he God is 'WE'

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Ashley Paul 16 September 2009

O lord and creator thank for beautiful world, Made it worth with seasons hot and cold, Endless sky with wonder and thunder,

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Chetna Purohit 16 September 2009

O lord and creator thank for beautiful world, Made it worth with seasons hot and cold, Endless sky with wonder and thunder,

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Subbaraman N V 12 September 2009

I am quite sure, the poem is not autobiographical! ? ! ? ! ? Good form and theme with a great message to the readers!

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Louis Rams 24 August 2009

prayers are all answered, and maybe not the way we want or need, but that depends on your deed.

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Shilpa Maheswari 19 August 2009

admission of guilt by self, , good sign, , , ,10

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Indani Narayan 17 August 2009

self admission is best method....10

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Lalvani Rekha 16 August 2009

confession and guild admission....10

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Pami Panchal 15 August 2009

elf concemnationis best one....10

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descriptive poem! ! ! I touched a blame through your lines great job! O lord and creator thank for beautiful world, Made it worth with seasons hot and cold, --> lovely words!

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Rajaram Ramachandran 13 August 2009

It is a kind of self condemnation and prayer to God for guidance. A nice poem.

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Sulochna Pandit 10 August 2009

self guillt admission is commendable...10

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Raju Rajput 10 August 2009

it is self admissionof weakness or fault...10

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Jigisha Vyas 10 August 2009

onshould bebrave eough to admit what he is....10

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Suwarna Patil 10 August 2009

self criticism and curse....10

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Saroj Davde 09 August 2009

m just useless on earth....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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