Robbie, enjoyed the way you wrote this, especially the use of the asides. Your surprise ending was well thought out. You deserve a ten for your invention.10/10
Regards,
Ian
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Robbie, enjoyed the way you wrote this, especially the use of the asides. Your surprise ending was well thought out. You deserve a ten for your invention.10/10 Regards, Ian