I left the place
And I died
My declaration goes
I am dead
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Love's declaration. I had thought I had died too when personals were shown back to me. So embarrassing! But, I love! I love fiercely! I accepted and accept it not to be returned. ok. I still love and that is my heart!
Very good, interesting metaphors used in your poem. Leaving, moving on, reflection, recognition. Nicely written.