I go crazy now a day
To esteem you my dear Sun
Your shine, your rays
Hot.. Pierce my skin
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a very beautiful write. great lines. fine composition. you leave me crazy. voted10 surya
you are not crazy my dear, this is the glee of a real poet. these things worth their existence when the poet like you gleefully dance in words. wonderful
Anyone would go crazy with so many things to love. Great job.
I go crazy now a day To esteem your wonderful poetry Your words, their meanings powerful, Pierce my soul like a lighening..........
lovely and amusing... with a love on nature..God's gift... the beautiful and significance of the Sun... thanks for sharing.... 10+++ lovelots, maia
Vow! You are totally smitten. The words carefully picked show the feelings. All the best.
it's that wee bit of craziness that gives us our identity...don't stop being crazy!