Monday, July 17, 2006

I Am Contented Comments

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As I held your hand tonight baby
Felt something strange inside me
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Joseph Daly 17 July 2006

This is nicely put together Scarlet. I like that you use a three-line stanza and leave the verse free yet controlled, if that is possible.

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Ashish R 17 July 2006

Wonderful......hope this thing that you started turns up into a happy ending. Wud luv 2 read a poem on it then.Great Work. Ashish.

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Patricia Gale 17 July 2006

A toast........hoping it continues!

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