Sunday, October 4, 2009

I Am Comfortable Comments

Rating: 4.6

and when the clouds gather rains

in the vast oceanic sky
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lady grace
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 19 October 2009

a good anology. marks 10 shan

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After the rain we are comfortable with the warmth of the sun. In any pace of life just hang on with HIM. Great write. Thanks! best regards, jdh

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Rafique Farooqi 14 October 2009

It is wonderful GRACE, get relaxed in happy weahers

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Joey Valenzuela 11 October 2009

oh lady grace...you're from phil? ? did you lose someone after peping stroke? ? ?

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Noel Horlanda 11 October 2009

yeah, lots of tears, faded moons, such a sad tale. An honest to goodness poetry.

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Akram Awadat 06 October 2009

very nice and beautiful description

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C. P. Sharma 06 October 2009

The oceanic sky Rains God's Grace Warmth of the sun Your heart trace Cool moon light's Soothing embrace Weave superb imagery O Lady Grace! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! CP

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Antonio Liao 05 October 2009

as silent ponder the night....the poem gallops the entity of superb lines of reality...God bless.... a true rhythm of truth... a 10 +

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 October 2009

and when the clouds gather rains in the vast oceanic sky when the moon-faded light resting sleep in sun’s hottest eyes.............if one canadjust with chaning scenerio or difficultiees, nothing can alter the path or deter us from pursuing the goal///// very good write....10 i like dit mot.... read mine i may not withdraw......step-in-stone

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Catrina Heart 05 October 2009

a nice little poem with a short description of your life...in any pace u r comfortable, good for you! ! ! well done............

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Patti Masterman 04 October 2009

Your poems have a rich and musical vocabulary.

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Rafique Farooqi 04 October 2009

Sun and moon are comforting you, ........i love short. poems

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Rajaram Ramachandran 04 October 2009

You are so comfortable when the moon fades its light and the sun starts its heat.

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Eyan Desir 04 October 2009

You are comfortable eating food and chatting with friends you forgot to add this to your poem anyway good try 4 nice lines....

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Ramin Chaman 04 October 2009

when the moon-faded light...] A nice line..too. And very peremptory...

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Ramesh T A 04 October 2009

Beautiful gathering rage of Nature well expressed! Especially contrast is wonderful in brief!

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Mohammed Albalushi 04 October 2009

nice rhythm and wonderful poem, i like it

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