and when the clouds gather rains
in the vast oceanic sky
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After the rain we are comfortable with the warmth of the sun. In any pace of life just hang on with HIM. Great write. Thanks! best regards, jdh
oh lady grace...you're from phil? ? did you lose someone after peping stroke? ? ?
yeah, lots of tears, faded moons, such a sad tale. An honest to goodness poetry.
The oceanic sky Rains God's Grace Warmth of the sun Your heart trace Cool moon light's Soothing embrace Weave superb imagery O Lady Grace! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! CP
as silent ponder the night....the poem gallops the entity of superb lines of reality...God bless.... a true rhythm of truth... a 10 +
and when the clouds gather rains in the vast oceanic sky when the moon-faded light resting sleep in sun’s hottest eyes.............if one canadjust with chaning scenerio or difficultiees, nothing can alter the path or deter us from pursuing the goal///// very good write....10 i like dit mot.... read mine i may not withdraw......step-in-stone
a nice little poem with a short description of your life...in any pace u r comfortable, good for you! ! ! well done............
Sun and moon are comforting you, ........i love short. poems
You are so comfortable when the moon fades its light and the sun starts its heat.
You are comfortable eating food and chatting with friends you forgot to add this to your poem anyway good try 4 nice lines....
when the moon-faded light...] A nice line..too. And very peremptory...
Beautiful gathering rage of Nature well expressed! Especially contrast is wonderful in brief!
a good anology. marks 10 shan