Tuesday, January 20, 2015

I Am Burning Up Comments

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I am burning up from the hot desire
is there a fire station around
lovely and soft spoken lover could suit
the situation for i am truly burning up
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Charity Nduhiu
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Abigael Muthoni 05 December 2016

get a fire extinguisher mum

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Allotey Abossey 16 July 2015

Sounds like a dirge.... Your words are very mournful but whatever it is, it's not the end, there's much ahead..... Stay blessed my friend.

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John Ugolo Umah 27 March 2015

If its for love, keep burning, for it is the sweetest act of life... This is a heat poem, I love it. (Y)

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John Ugolo Umah 03 February 2015

This is heated when we fall in love with the right person and they are no more close, it remind me of a love one gone away into another's arm, hmm this piece is hot, burning and beautiful... Keep the ink on Charity.

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