My smiles are buds,
my laughter are flowers,
my hairs are silk,
my eyes are stars,
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Verily, a poet who keeps his poetic aspirations alive and nurtures it well
Lovely write! Though the poem is all hyperbole, there is a special charm to it! Enjoyed reading it, Akhtarji!
Wonderful imagery. A metaphorical composition so attractively penned. A poet's beloved has the superlative power and abilities. A best poem Akhtar sir, I like it very much. .....10
Perfectly envisioned. A poet's beloved is immortalized with superlatives and rhyme
You are darling of Ghazal, Sweetheart of Nazm and beloved of poetry..............Superb poem. Loved it 10+++
The beloved of a poet has all the beauty of the world on her lap...even has the demonic power of a beast... and all of these are the gifts given by the poet to her. sublime creation. loved it.10+
Awesome and a real beauty. The imagery brings our the charm of the poet's muse that is the primary source of his inspiration which also provides a sensuous treat to the reader. Thanks. It is now added to the list of my favourite poems.