Friday, October 2, 2015

I Am Beloved Of A Poet Comments

Rating: 5.0

My smiles are buds,
my laughter are flowers,
my hairs are silk,
my eyes are stars,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rajnish Manga 15 January 2017

Awesome and a real beauty. The imagery brings our the charm of the poet's muse that is the primary source of his inspiration which also provides a sensuous treat to the reader. Thanks. It is now added to the list of my favourite poems.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 07 October 2015

Verily, a poet who keeps his poetic aspirations alive and nurtures it well

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Valsa George 04 October 2015

Lovely write! Though the poem is all hyperbole, there is a special charm to it! Enjoyed reading it, Akhtarji!

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Bisma Mirza 03 October 2015

Beautiful really...........10 on 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2015

Wonderful imagery. A metaphorical composition so attractively penned. A poet's beloved has the superlative power and abilities. A best poem Akhtar sir, I like it very much. .....10

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Kelly Kurt 02 October 2015

Perfectly envisioned. A poet's beloved is immortalized with superlatives and rhyme

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M Asim Nehal 02 October 2015

You are darling of Ghazal, Sweetheart of Nazm and beloved of poetry..............Superb poem. Loved it 10+++

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Sanjukta Nag 02 October 2015

The beloved of a poet has all the beauty of the world on her lap...even has the demonic power of a beast... and all of these are the gifts given by the poet to her. sublime creation. loved it.10+

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