I Am........ Becoming Yours....... Comments

A lovely flowing write..life lesson through words and actions!

The saying is 'you never forget first love'.

the two poems i now read have similar rhythm and flow...good to read!

You are a passionate person, with passionate words to share. Do not change.

Hey it just took away my heart......... Its really very very beautifull......... Any girl will fall in love with this poem........ Really gerat job........ God bless

this is very good Mr. Rohit :) thanks for sharing...

Its really very romantic :)

Reads like a sort of magic spell of love.

oh so sweet..i like it..too romantic..really awesome

Awesome! You have a natural talent in writing love poems. This one is so sweet and precious! WEll penned! ; D

Its cute! Chhavi Anupam

beauty within everything around... this work beautifully emotes what one goes through when his lover says the words which every one waits to hear... total submissiveness.. when everything around feels special.. and how we just flow through the gusty love wind. beautifully potrayed and great use of imagery...

Many Love starts even as 'I Hate You' and ends up 'I Love You' Both have Three words only. Luckily your journey is 'I Love You' all along.

Wonderful lyric poem, Rohit, your feelings of love are very well expressed here, thank you for sharing...