I Am At War Comments

i still like it! ! ! bri :)

“To blend in to the background of their selfish lives” ……….here (in u.s.) I would type “into”, but I have noticed several poets from the ‘british empire’ who seem to chop some of my words into/in to two words. I guess it is a cultural difference. favorite lines so far: “I am at war with my inner soul I will devour them whole For I am not that mole, who will continue to live in darkness Or allow them to smother me in soil I have reached the boiling point.” ……………..nice flow and rhymes and thinking :) :) and more: “I don't want war, I want peace A piece of history Where I was allowed to be as good as you thought you were Confidence, self esteem grew rapidly It showed you the door.” …………….. I like the use of ‘peace’ followed by ‘piece’ I wonder; did YOU show someone “to the door”? did you lock it behind her/him? to MyPoemList bri :)