! ! I Am At Peace! ! ! ! Comments

what wonder the Lord thy God gives us.... a solitute of peace.... even Jesus.... utter the word peace......for the world have a different view of peace... your peace Rema is a peace of the solitute of our soul... thank you

Unusual similies and odd usages do not detract from the singularity of this piece; there is a mediative theme which binds it neatly together. Rgds, Ivan

fine poem.........................

Righteous life brings out right words thatt can correct this world. Fascinating piece.This poem has increased my respect towards you sathya narayana

there's none like one's own self as a companinon...feels good to read...

If only all of us could be taking this stroll with you and being at peace, one and all.

absolutely fantastic. this piece put me at peace. i love your work! ! so positive and uplifting...

… The loneliness and unity … is beautiful and is melodious … the reader with you ….10 …

It is interesting, how certain words we use sound like certain sounds. The words you used sound silent, calm, like a still ocean or tranquil sunrise. Though the sunrise doesn't make sound, I would think so, by reading your poem.

yet the colors razzling over the rungs of stance the whisper when impulses the blue........................yet genial bedecking by the metaphors ingeniously, soothing, wellpenned, thanks for sharing

a lovely soothing poem. i too feel most at peace whenever i am in natural sorroundings. its like meditation. thanks for sharing such a fine poem.10 mamta

Sigh... lovely medititive poem. HG: -) xx

Rema, After reading you, even I am at peace. *10*

It is a gift that we can experience peace in such a world fill with turmoil and hatred. This gift God gives to even the ones who hate him. Thank you, with respect. Jeannie. You write well.....

There is something peaceful about the sea, and walking along the shore, a lovely poem that brings peace to the reader, Best wishes Lynda xx

hope and contentment in the end....this poem is peacefull, , , , thnax rema

How well you united the loneliness, being alone, and the overwhelming peace. I like this: 'waves calm after a violent grimace'...

wonderful. This poem is definitely the key to the inner cloister

i love it it seems so romantic did u mean by the faint whisper the small hope that is left

a poem at peace...thanks for sharing, rema