Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, July 29, 2012

I Am An Ordinary Man Comments

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I am an ordinary man to dream
Very humble and down to earth to touch even an arm
Not at all in any position to cause harm
Keep well with the distance and feel warm
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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 October 2022

Yes we may not speak in open But certainly may prefer to retaliate even Then mighty dictator also may flee As our sentiments may be strong and free...excellent poetic expression sir. You are very down to the earth dear poet. I love your personality.

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Indeed war is very destructive and must be avoided. The fighters them are also affected socially. Though not with much poetry devises, the few like the rhyme make it interesting.

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I like the way you use the rhyme efect. The poem is easy to understand. War is a destroyer of many things It also has negative effect on the fighters. Experience is the best teacher.

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Kasia Fedyk 30 July 2012

Very profound words and vision of what our world is today and yet the humbleness of ones soul stands like a light among the charged world, no one can take that away, my flow of feelings as I read this brilliant write! Thank you!

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Gicaniro Gicaniro 30 July 2012

as our sentiments may be strong and free so are your!

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LaSoaphia QuXazs Yes, life is meant to be explored. If we do not do it, or shut down everything, we die. You are so right.

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Re: I am an ordinary man (Score: 1) by Zbird on Sunday, July 29,2012 (16: 53: 23) you may be an ordinary man but this is and extraordinary poem

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Laura Bailey Very nicely written! 3 minutes ago · Like · 1

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Matloob Bokhari great ink 4 minutes ago · Like · 1

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Gagan Neota Beautifully Expressed Sir...4 minutes ago · Like

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Khushi Raaj Bhatiya You extra ordinery ji.9 minutes ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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I am an ordinary man to dream Very humble and down to earth to touch even an arm

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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