Thursday, September 17, 2015

I Am Always Unhappy Comments

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When I saw her first glimpse,
I was amazed, what a beauty was she!
but then I found I am unhappy with her,
I wanted to see her more and more.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Hazel Durham 26 October 2015

A superb write as tantalizing as the girl who made you feel unhappy, she made you need more and more from her as your desires made you feel miserable as there is no end to wanting!

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Valsa George 18 September 2015

But I can't understand why you are unhappy! You got whatever you desired from her.....! So I presume, in your unhappiness, is a happiness!

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Kelly Kurt 18 September 2015

Yes, sometimes the journey is more satisfying than the destination.: -)

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