Saturday, June 23, 2018

I Am Also Smiling With The Naughty Nemesis Comments

Rating: 5.0

In old times, in this area,
dejected lovers used to sit in restraint
at the doors of an unkind beloved,
a complete hunger strike,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 June 2018

A great political satire. Brilliantly penned. Enjoyed reading it.Liked the last five lines. I smiled while reading this wonderful poem.10++++++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 June 2018

PART WAS CORRECTED SOORRRY ITS AGAIN MISSING

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 June 2018

ha..lol it's seldom (was missed out) is the only cash which one need not in banks stash - - -All know it every one LOVES IT all enjoy it the only free gift of ALMIGHTY

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 June 2018

very nice... follow the leader...AKHBAR was illiterate - - but very EXPERIENCED... He had BIRBAL the most read one to help him, AKHBAR ruled the KINGDOM... VAST INDIATHEN ALL IN ONE...NOW IN PIECES/FRAGMENTS................ which was being ruled- - as now that way.....ha..lol it's seldom is the only cash which one need not in banks stash All know it every one LOVES IT

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 June 2018

the topics- political humor! yeah really greatly written the poem is in the sense of humor. ..........Smiling with the naughty Nemesis What can I do if one studies at Oxford and Cambridge still he remains illiterate, nice humorous lines...10+++

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