Monday, April 13, 2009

I Am Alive! ! ! Comments

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I am the smile that shines on a young face
I am the laugh that echoes through your ears
I am the blood pulsing through your veins,
I am the first kiss you receive
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Brittanie Thornton
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Debra Kemper 16 April 2009

Very nice! Excellent imagery! Your word choice is very effective. What a nice picture you paint!

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SAM Mitsuki 14 April 2009

Awww 'I am the Dip to your chip' That is really cute. I really like it! ^~

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