Wednesday, May 28, 2008

I Am Alive Comments

Rating: 4.9

It begins..
Waking with a heart beat I can hear,
I’m alive.
I know what today shall be.
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COMMENTS
~ Jon London ~ 31 May 2008

very well composed piece of writing...nicely penned message of life's hope best wishes Jon

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Duncan Wyllie 30 May 2008

A poem of hope, expressing life felt within our moment on earth Brilliant! Love duncan X

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Marvin Brato 28 May 2008

Real good penning.... makes me feel alive! High marks.

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