Sunday, September 9, 2012

I Am Alive Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mind filled with all dark clouds
Their shadow taunts me aloud
Making me deaf, dumb and blind
Throwing my dreams in thrash
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Ketan Hukare
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Disha 03 January 2018

Its a really touching poem😀

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Teddy Opundo 24 July 2013

Perfect penning.Great poem..

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Kelvin Owusu 01 January 2013

an excellent poem, good compliments on each line. a nice flow making it a great read. a positive outlook, love the last stanza this is great write.

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Lyn Paul 09 September 2012

Thanks Ketan, Hope you are alive to write many more of these creative words. Thank you

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