Saturday, September 20, 2014

I Am Afraid Comments

Rating: 5.0

The way world is moving today
I am afraid to say.
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Roseann Shawiak 11 April 2015

Amitava, your poem holds very explicit ways in which our world is being destroyed, it was with great sorrow that I read this poem, because I see it happening even now and no one seems to lift a finger to change anything. It is very heartbreaking to see our world crumbling like this because of a handful of evil and selfish people. You have very vividly portrayed the horrendous consequences that are befalling us at this moment. We need to learn to work with each other to make this a better world today so future generations will have harmony and peace for their children and themselves. Great poem! Great message, Amitava! 10 -10's! ! Thank you for sharing your views, they seem to coincide with many people of like minds. RoseAnn

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Lyn Paul 24 September 2014

I am afraid too Just so hard to believe that this is real. We must believe that things can and will change for the better. Thank you Amitava

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Soulful Heart 24 September 2014

a poem reminding us of the grave consequences predicted ahead....yet we do not pay heed....simple and didactic....

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Salini Nair 24 September 2014

very realistic.............by next century definitely world will ruin if this is the way of life..................nice sir

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Ramesh Rai 22 September 2014

Just commented upon natural harmony on poem of Akhtar Jawad. Our fear is imperative and reason for survival of human race. Live and let live is the only mantra for survival of all.In nature we all are supplement to each other. Your poem conveys the great message for maintaing the natural harmony. If a stone is thrown in a pond waves are sure to touch the shore.Much inspired with two poems. Thanks for sharing. Regards.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 September 2014

This awesome true to life poem makes me tink of the phrase, 'the world is going to the dogs'. Humanity is destroyin itself. Kudos. Pls do review my latest poem.

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Valsa George 20 September 2014

We all feel that we are heading into some sort of peril.... But let us hope that by the efforts of many, conditions will improve and nothing alarming will happen as we fear! A good write!

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Dinesan Madathil 20 September 2014

You are sharing the apprehensions of all of us dear poet... We are helpless as of now. A note of optimism cannot revive things either... A good poem sir

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Akhtar Jawad 20 September 2014

A timely message in a thoughtful poem12866

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Gajanan Mishra 20 September 2014

humanity reverts back, I like it, thanks.

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