Saturday, March 8, 2008

I Am A Young School Boy Comments

Rating: 3.8

I am a young school boy,
With a white shirt and black tie,
I dream to fly high,
Like a falcon in the sky,
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Tsira Goge 05 September 2008

You have very dexterously caught character of the schoolboy... And I something have learnt about yours teachers, but structure of school teachers almost identical, everywhere... Beautifully write... From my 10.. Best wishes, Tsira .

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Delilah Miller 11 July 2008

It's not how I remember my young school days, but it's certainly cute and very detailed. Simple rhyme fits the child-like narrative.

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Sreelekha Premjit 18 March 2008

You have managed to capture the feelings of a school boy, a smart one too, with such accurate observations of his teachers. I wonder what my children would say of me.

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