Friday, October 30, 2009

I Am A Working Woman Comments

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I am a working woman
single chain adoring my necks
a beautiful sky blue saree well decorated
with smiling face a mask in content
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lily peace lago every by to ph
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Ranjit Ravindran 03 November 2009

'I am a working woman single chain adoring my necks a beautiful sky blue saree well decorated with smiling face a mask in content'.................stereotype of an Indian Woman(I am happy its changing now-a-days) Nice write.

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Raj Nandy 31 October 2009

LET THIS BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF POETRY REMAIN AS A TRIBUTE TO ALL OUR WOKING WOMEN! 10 + -Raj

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Ramesh T A 31 October 2009

Working woman can stand on her own legs despite difficulties in life which is something good for better survival than others of other kinds! A heart touching poem to read! Working woman has independence precious in life!

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Ejaz Khan 30 October 2009

A well crafted write, portraying the lives of working woman life isn't a dance on roses, especially true when it comes to woman of the world, very thought provoking poem!

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Kesav Easwaran 30 October 2009

'Catching the butterfly, running behind the bee wearing a single rose and jumping the rope Try to touch the sky sitting on a branch of a tamarind tree in tasting a ripe mango vivid was my childhood days'... so nice these detailing..nicer must have been your childhood days...10

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Shakuntala Sharma 30 October 2009

this is the tale of many a working woman ....

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Rakesh Bedi 30 October 2009

very pathetic tale; depicted with sadness.....good, lago lago.....

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lily peace lago every by to ph

lily peace lago every by to ph

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