I am a window
people look through me
they see reflections of themselves
and what they want to see
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Asim, Are you a single or double or double pane window, wooden or aluminum framed?
'The speaker' certainly does NOT sound 'humble'. I sometimes write poems in which I sound anything but 'humble'; I'm trying then to be 'funny'. ;) bri
I tend to agree with Anil's comment re 'Amazing flow and rhyming', though I think 'Amazing' is too strong. What you 'express', however, is not very clear. (to me anyway)
Ever so Creative and Beautifully composed! .. This is so awesome! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++
Perhaps I am stained glass. I liked the window into your world!
I've read this several times now and can't get enough of it. It is so well written. Loved it dearly.
Amazing flow and rhyming. Very nicely expressed. Great share.5 stars.
SO! ! YOU are the thief who 'took the love and kindness'! ! ! Bring it back; I could use some. : ) bri