Wednesday, March 27, 2024

I Am A Window To My Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am a window
people look through me
they see reflections of themselves
and what they want to see
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M. Asim Nehal
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Bri Edwards 02 April 2024

SO! ! YOU are the thief who 'took the love and kindness'! ! ! Bring it back; I could use some. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 02 April 2024

Asim, Are you a single or double or double pane window, wooden or aluminum framed?

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Bri Edwards 02 April 2024

'The speaker' certainly does NOT sound 'humble'. I sometimes write poems in which I sound anything but 'humble'; I'm trying then to be 'funny'. ;) bri

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Bri Edwards 02 April 2024

I tend to agree with Anil's comment re 'Amazing flow and rhyming', though I think 'Amazing' is too strong. What you 'express', however, is not very clear. (to me anyway)

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Deepak S S 29 March 2024

I can see thru this window now.

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Rebecca Navarre 28 March 2024

So Beautifully Inspirational! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 28 March 2024

Ever so Creative and Beautifully composed! .. This is so awesome! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 28 March 2024

Oh Wow! .. Deeply heart moving! .. And powerful! ..

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Anjandev Roy 28 March 2024

Such a precious work...... thank u....my friend....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 March 2024

Bravo my friend ThankU for sharing

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Rob Lamberton 27 March 2024

Perhaps I am stained glass. I liked the window into your world!

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D.N. Rebb 27 March 2024

I've read this several times now and can't get enough of it. It is so well written. Loved it dearly.

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Sando Hussam 27 March 2024

Never thought on those lines before.

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 March 2024

Amazing flow and rhyming. Very nicely expressed. Great share.5 stars.

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M. Asim Nehal

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