I Am A Transition Comments

Has the strong nature of one highly motivated soul who's greatest joy in life it seems to always keep in tune with the many vibrations of the revolutionary beat of cosmos at all costs, ever been portrayed as light-winged as it has been in this wondrous piece of poetry here? Endless variations on truth are often times being read out aloud otherwise in the much less easy-going words of the less motivated, whose vain heads are trying so hard to compete with one another for constant self-importance in a world of transition, many of which are evermore outstretched flamboyantly on oh so high necks.

A very good transition of time as it moves on. Very good write. Lynn

Deep idea. Nicely written.

introspective piece.........well penned

the journey through the inner landscape..moving from one milestone to the other well penned

the journey through the inner landscape..moving from one milestone to the other well penned

'I am passage transported by time. As my feet travel silently between the alphabets-back and forth and side to side with a flaming desire to transit- To stop the madness of time.' Excellent poem, I am delighted. Marvelous imagination.10+++