Monday, January 30, 2012

I Am A Teenager Comments

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I am a teenager…

My mind fluctuates from here to there
My aims changes from common to rare
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LUCKY GAUTAM poet
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Aastha Uppal 31 January 2012

the fickle mindedness of the most beautiful phase of life has been truly explained in this one.. especially like the way it ends 'I am now a star who is bright less' the way it associates the star with bright less..nice contradiction... keep writing! !

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