I Am A Talky Comments

Thanks Mike Smith and anticipating some comments on my other poems.

So glad to see you edited this Shahid. Now you've made something relatable and worthy of recognition. Thank you

You say the poem is about talkative people, but you reference several times talkative girls and not guys. This makes it come off rather bigoted in my opinion. Incessant talking can get to ones nerves I suppose. Agree there. But this poem implies that only girls talk incessantly, and not only that, but that they do so BECAUSE they are girls and can't help it. It's the epitome stereotyping and it's simply not accurate. My suggestion, either massively edit the piece to leave gender out, or just pull the poem off the site. Hate to be discouraging, but this is not a good poem or a good message to send