I Am A Stream Comments

AN INTERESTING PRESENTATION OF THE LIFE OF A STREAM.........a stylish poem with mesmerizing lines......enjoyed a lot........ thanks SIR

Beautiful poem with great imagery! Enjoyed the course of the stream through woodland vistas and rocky terrains to be finally united with the sea! Enjoyed much and a 10

superb metaphors.......peace the essential elrment thats misding in todays world...

To find where you need to be In the lap of peace Get through this creek Then you will know How to pursue dreams.....near that shore we glimpse many dreams...................beautiful poem

Quiet Beautiful lines....... Now listen to me To find where you need to be In the lap of peace Get through this creek Then you will know How to pursue dreams Beautiful flow of stream, very well flowing in beautiful rhythm and rhyme. Beautiful write. Loved reading it.