Wednesday, October 5, 2011

I Am A Star Because Of You So Far Comments

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I am a star
Larger than the moon
Size cannot be seen
I'm because of so far
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Udaya R. Tennakoon
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Rebecca Lyle 22 March 2017

Nicely written poem of the beyond, very nicely penned.

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Daniel Brick 23 December 2015

I read your profile thoroughly, it is an eloquent story of one of the great dramas of our modern age: exile and displacement. I who am rooted in one place all my life, and completely accepted by my neighbors, cannot possibly know what you know. I applaud your courage and persistent quest for understanding. Your poem eloquently displays your life through cosmic imagery. And irony, because your status as an exoplanet weakens the fullness of your light and so your radiance is not recognized for what it is. But your words shine brightly to anyone reading this poem.

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Udaya R. Tennakoon

Udaya R. Tennakoon

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