I Am (A Sonnet.) Comments

Hi John - Nice sonnet with a consistent rhyming pattern - it does flow but not a consistent metre. Very good content - it scores a TEN. I like the adjectives you use - most of them have a good masculine ring. Sharp - ancient - dark - endless - lonely - soothing - untamed - unyielding - mighty - graceful? - rousing - not scared - giver. The verbs qualified by the adjectives are also very masculine. You have obviously given a lot of thought to this one - well done. Yours in poetry - JOHN.

Beautiful poem and overflowing positivity. There is immense potential in all of us. It has to be explored and used. CP

That was quiet an intresting poem! I liked it thou! had a nice rhyming scheme good discribing words and over all theme. Thank you for sharing: D Sayz