I Am A Silent Sea Comments

Absolutely brilliant..! I tasted the nectar in it

Love this! This poem really highlights such a sufficient point. Showing emotion can be difficult. On the outside people see a completely different image of how you actually feel. Beyond all the laugh and smiles lies more a deeper emotion that is hard to come terms with. In your poem you use the word tsunami and I think by using such a word like this has defiantly justified how your pain is but yet you still want to be true to yourself and be. I strong. I relate to this poem on so may levels and I can say the pain I have suffered with losing my Mum at a young age has been a pain that will never go away but I still want to live my life and make her proud each day by being strong. I hope you find the strength my friend, Know that life is too short to waste (Poem Perfect 10!) God bless, Melissa.