Sunday, September 15, 2013

I Am A Rock Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ah! What globe that keeps this glebe
Where is my childhood? Was I, a dweeb?
Thou; Poverty arrow, shot on my stomach,
Maimed heart, be calm, aches, don’t ache
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Sallam Yassin 16 September 2013

the peace of mind and heart in a journey of life when gaining the wisdom a success in life

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Pardaz Sheikh 15 September 2013

a lots of pain....about to cry nice

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Pardaz Sheikh 15 September 2013

a lots of pain....about to cry nice

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Ruby Mostazir 15 September 2013

I never fear As I lost my childhood and Bahar; ....so touching! can't xplain!

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Geetha Jayakumar 15 September 2013

Beautiful poem with different messages on life itself..childhood lost somewhere, cannot be brought back..loved reading it..

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