Thursday, February 23, 2012

I Am A Pen Comments

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I am a pen
Which was bought by Ken
That boy who always became den
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Mohammed Zuhair
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Neetha Sasidharan 23 February 2012

zuhair, dis z a very gud idea..but i think u should work more on conveying ur idea more clearely...u can use some rhymes...i was also like dis when i was of ur age.. kp penning...

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 23 February 2012

What do you mean? MOHAMMED Zuhair

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