Thursday, July 2, 2009

I Am A Note Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am a Note, a note that is dieing,
My maker, she wont stop crying.
She writes me over and over,
And all she keeps doing is lieing.
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Jazmin Baird
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Kristina B; Williams 08 July 2009

HAD TO GIVE GUITAR, GOODBYE, N THIS 1 ALL 10S..PLEASE FIND THE TIME TO VOTE ON MINE, EVEN IF YOU DONT FIND THE TIME TO READ EM ALL STILL VOTE WITH HONEST 3 10S, MY NEW POETIC FRIEND...I HAVE 6 NEWEST 1S, MY LATEST IS EMBERS, N A FIRE, ABLAZE..PLEASE SEND ME YOUR COMMENTS N INVITES

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Chitra - 04 July 2009

the shades or rather the the highs and lows (notes) of love...well orchestrated

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Marieta Maglas 03 July 2009

''She lies to his face, It brakes her embrace. All she wants to do is run, All she wants to do is race.'' wonderful poem, I feel i can understand you...10 from me

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Michelle Mcgath 02 July 2009

Very nice. It seems we both feel the same! ! LOL.

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Rachel Martin 02 July 2009

very deep. & showing stages of going through love.

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