Sunday, October 13, 2013

I Am A Moth Comments

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Yes, I am a moth, born to burn
My desire is, only light
I am not glow worm
The flame kills me
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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 23 October 2013

I am a moth - wow! reflecting and symbolizing our own life. Good write bhai.

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Unwritten Soul 23 October 2013

Simple that rise from wise mind...less complicated is always make thing clear and great...10_Soul

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Wahab Abdul 17 October 2013

you have ended the poem superbly.. love it a lot...10

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Gajanan Mishra 13 October 2013

I talk humanity, good write, thanks. Please read my new poems.

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