My children planned a visit to a zoo,
They invited me, I replied with a shoo,
I already have a zoo inside, within me,
I cannot show and you cannot see.
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Lovely poem.we all have animals inside us .It pokes its head out at times.thanks.
.............so true both men and animals are made from the same basic ingredients....blood, flesh and hair and each has their own personalities....of course some animals like some men do not have hair...enjoyed this write...
Wonderful poem. Each line expressing the thoughts so well. Yes we carry all animal qualities in us. Some time we are worst than animals.
Beautiful poem. Very true said man is a combination of both. You have explained beautifully in each lines. Loved reading it.
Man is at once human and beastly! Enjoyed the poem particularly the first two stanzas! It was a grand opening! !
Yes bad immoral impious men hav animalistic traits. But a truly good person is elevated above such animal character. Only bad men ape and copy animals. U wrote a fabulous hardhitting poem in great rhyme. Pls review my latest poem, .
A thoughtful write man is a social animal........................................