Tuesday, September 15, 2020

I Am A Magic Feather Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am a magic feather,
Forever floating free.
I land on children's pillows,
When they have dreams of me.
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Shaun Cronick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 September 2020

A poetic gem that will always deliver a happy smile to whoever read this wonderful poem. An enchanting and entertaining write for children!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 September 2020

What a lovely poem, Shaun. So tenderly written for children to keep and read. So mellifluous when read. Liked how you crafted this poem. Very well written with nice rhyme and flow. Enjoyed reading it. Top Marks! !

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Dominic Windram 16 September 2020

A most enchanting poem Shaun. I think my niece will simply love it! I don't know if you have read any of the work of the poet Walter de la Mare, but he also composes some truly magical/enchanting verse. Indeed, he is one of my favourite poets. It's definitely a treasure for ever inspired ten from me or is it now a fantastic five out of five...judging by the changes (for the sake of change if you ask me) ...what's the point?

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