I Am A Lullaby Comments

OH Dorothy, you have written a poem that should be everyone's theme from the time they get up, til the time they go to bed, each and every day. You have given me another reason to smile today because of this. This poem shines in the hearts of everyone who reads this, like the sun shines its warm rays on us. This poem is relaxing, and easy to read. Thank you so much for drawing me to it. Love & hugs, Barbara

You truly are a lullaby! A Brother's Love

Dorothy, this is an absolute gem of a poem...it touched me totally! Blessings, theo

Superb poem, Dorothy. Very gentle and joyful. One suggestion though - 'My nose quivers at the scent of a rose' - this doesn't sound quite right. Can I suggest 'My nose delights at the scent of a rose' or something similar? Love, Fran xx