Wednesday, May 29, 2019

I Am A Lost Star Comments

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I am a Lost Star

Sitting close by You,
Sitting close by Your Light,
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Prabir Gayen
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Pranab K Chakraborty 09 June 2019

...Presence is lost in the womb of nothingness, Between two waves I am an unfounded Line never to find my way, ...................................................................lines are very much poetic and through this light of existence one could find the choice to make ones journey through poetry and art. Thanks.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 June 2019

A meaningful and powerful write. The power of the mind can sometimes create illusions that could mar our existence and happiness. Loneliness.has been vividly portrayed in this.poem of great depth.

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Srijan Mondal 01 June 2019

Sitting close by You I am a vagrant star, In the sky of consciousness I have no root... ... beautiful line

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 June 2019

A soul all alone, a genuine feeling many feel so. You are good with this theme. The piece is flooded with spirituality, divine despair, the readers also seem to. And you feel from a lonely star to a lost star.

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I am a Lost Star Sitting close by You, Sitting close by Your Light....... The light comes from the Guru Sri Sri

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Julia Luber 30 May 2019

This looks like an Ashram I would like to visit….is it open to visitors?

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Prabir Gayen 30 May 2019

Art of Living international centre... Bangalore..India..(Founder Sri Sri Ravi Shankar) ...open for all.

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Julia Luber 30 May 2019

Between two waves I am an unfounded Line never to find my way Sitting close by you, I am a vagrant star In the sky of consciousness I have no root. Prabir is as good with themes of loneliness, alienation and depression as he is with passion and love and the fire in our hearts; that he does not avoid being cynical sometimes - out of shame or fear- but being honest about both the good and the bad of emotions and feelings is what makes him such a convincing important poet.

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Anjandev Roy 30 May 2019

Heart leaps with surge of pain.....very impressive. Great write. Thank u.anjandev roy.

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Kostas Lagos 30 May 2019

Your way of writing is highly impressive

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