Wednesday, June 25, 2014

I Am A Leaf Comments

Rating: 3.6

I am a leaf
a dry beautiful leaf,
I am taken with the breeze
to my lovely dream.
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Kirti Sharma
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Amitava Sur 30 July 2014

A well written poem narrating a leaf getting matured leaving it's green home with a dream.

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Heather Wilkins 05 July 2014

this is a lovely metaphor nicely written enjoyed

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Khairul Ahsan 29 June 2014

This is a beautiful poem, soft and smooth. A dry leaf leaving her green home, being carried by the gentle breeze to her dreamland... a somber thought, but why so?

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Saurav Singh 26 June 2014

: -) Its a sweet poem. beautifully expressed. i like it! : -)

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Akhtar Jawad 26 June 2014

Kirti, it's a lovely nice poem.

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